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Wednesday, 23 August 2017

ACID RAIN

ACID RAIN CYCLE:


ACID RAIN

  • CAUSES
Acid rain is caused by a chemical reaction that begins when compounds like sulfur dioxide and nitrogen oxides are released into the air. These substances can rise very high into the atmosphere, where they mix and react with water, oxygen, and other chemicals to form more acidic pollutants, known as acid rain.
  • FORMATION
Acid rain is caused by a chemical reaction that begins when compounds like sulfur dioxide and nitrogen oxides are released into the air. These substances can rise very high into the atmosphere, where they mix and react with water, oxygen, and other chemicals to form more acidic pollutants, known as acid rain.
  • EFFECTS ON THE ENVIRONMENT
Acid rain has many ecological effects, but none is greater than its impact on lakes, streams, wetlands, and other aquatic environments. Acid rain makes waters acidic, and causes them to absorb the aluminum that makes its way from soil into lakes and streams.
  • WHY NZ IS NOT AFFECTED AS MUSH AS OTHER COUNTRIES
NZ is not that affected because NZ uses natural forces for power and they do not burn coal or any fossil fuel for power and they use hydro power plants to get power in rivers and in oceans and that is helping the environment especially NZ
  • SIMILARITIES/DIFFERENCES BETWEEN ACID RAIN AND OCEANIC ACIDIFICATION
Ocean acidification is a result of CO2 concentration in the atmosphere. CO2 dissolves in water to form carbonic acid, this carbonic acid reacts with the calcium carbonate (product of weathered rock) in the ocean water. Carbonic acid increases the amount of hydrogen ions in the ocean water, these hydrogen ions interact with calcium carbonate creating bicoarbonate. Marine organisms need calcium carbonate to synthesize shells, as we continuously add excess CO2 to our atmosphere, we increase the amount of CO2 in the oceans, which results in more carbonic acid. The more carbonic acid we have in the oceans, the less calcium carbonate we have. If marine organisms are not able to produce shells or exoskeletons, they die. Their death destabilizes the oceanic ecosystems, ultimately resulting in the destabilization of terrestrial ecosystems on a global scale. 

Acid rain is a product of burning coal and other industrial wastes. Coal contains sulfur, when the coal is burned, this sulfur is introduced to the atmosphere where chemical reactions occur resulting in sulfur oxides. Chemical changes convert some of these sulfur oxides into sulfuric acid. This sulfuric acid is taken back to the surface of earth with rain, acid rain. Other industrial wastes produce pollutants that result in nitrogen oxides, which also contribute to acid rain. 

Both acid rain and ocean acidification are dangerous and damaging. Acid rain can destroy entire forests, alter the chemistry of soils, lakes, rivers, etc. 

Ocean acidification has a much quicker effect on earth's life, although they are both equally bad, I would say that ocean acidification has a much greater impact on the planet as a whole than acid rain. Ocean acidification can lead to mass extinctions. 

WHAT'S INSIDE A COMPUTER?


WHAT'S INSIDE
A COMPUTER?

My experience of pulling apart a computer was
amazing cause I get to see what's inside a computer and it was thrilling because it was my first time and I love computers




















I can use this knowledge about the inside of a computer and possibly enhance the technology it self and make it even faster than the computers of our time now and then make it better, faster and smarter in the future and this can be my career for the future.

Friday, 18 August 2017

MUSIC - BLOG ENTRY

Blog entry.
1. What song are you performing? (add a link to the song)

2. What is the song about?
The song beautiful by Eminem is about his life and his struggles in depression and prescription drugs and the song is about us to remember what detroit was during the old days when it was helping the world become better and the things Detroit manufactured.

3. What instrument will you play the song on? Why did you choose this song?

My Voice, I chose this song because i like it and i like the story and lyrics in it

Tuesday, 1 August 2017

2017 Year 10 Written Text Assessment on ‘The Outsiders’
QUESTIONS (Choose ONE)
1. Describe at least one important relationship in the written text(s). Explain how this relationship positively or negatively influenced one or more characters.
2. Describe at least one important setting in the written text(s). Explain how the setting helped you to understand at least one idea. Note: “Setting” may refer to physical places as well as social and historical contexts.
3. Describe at least one important character in the written text(s). Explain how the character changes throughout the text(s).
4. Describe an important conflict in the written text. Explain how the conflict helped you to understand an important message.
5. Describe an incident that changes the course of events in the written text(s). Explain how this change helped you to understand an important idea.
6. Describe at least one important technique used in the written text(s). Explain how the use of the technique created impact. Note: Techniques could include figures of speech, syntax, word-choice, style, symbolism, structure, or narrative point-of-view.




And don’t forget the GOLDEN rules:
G ather ideas: who? what? when? where? why? how?
O rganise them: what’s the best order?
L ink ideas or paragraphs: “Not only do we learn…, but also…  .”
D escriptive words: stunning, exquisite, brilliant, excellent
E nabling words or phrases: for example, for instance, we see this     when, as an illustration, to demonstrate
N eat and tidy: punctuation, grammar, spelling


Statement about the  written text technique/aspect
Evidence from the written text
Explanation of the meaning shown in relation to the question
Explanation of author’s purpose
Your link to the human experience (self, society, or world)
(A) within ‘The Outsiders’
(B) another  novel  
(C) another text
Sentence Starters:





For example,

For instance,

We see this when,

This is demonstrated,
This shows…

This makes the audience think…

This makes the audience feel…

This makes us understand…
S.E.Hinton did this to

The purpose of this

This was done to



This aspect can be compared to…
This aspect can be contrasted to…
This can be juxtaposed to…
This reminds me of...
Examples:

In Macbeth by William Shakespeare, dialogue was used to show the state of  Macbeth’s mind.




For instance, the line “Is this a dagger I see before me?” demonstrates Macbeth questioning  his reality.
This technique reveals Macbeth’s character  by showing the audience that he has started to hallucinate and that his mind is playing tricks on him, or, alternatively, that the witches are having more influence on him than he realises.  
Shakespeare did this to show the consequences of Macbeth’s guilty actions. As the play progresses, Macbeth’s mind becauses more troubled and Shakespeare uses Macbeth’s  dialogue, actions, and the conversations of other to reflect this.
This dialogue  can be juxtaposed with the feast when he has a visitation of Banquo’s ghost and says “Then comes my fit again: I had else been perfect”. This highlights, to some degree, the fact that Macbeth is conscious of his hallucinations. However, a characteristic of insanity is the insane person not knowing that are in fact insane and by the end of the play, Macbeth no longer knows what is real and what is imagined around him. This highlights the fact that guilt through murder and ‘unfettered’ ambition can affect the state of people's’ minds.














Statement about the  written text technique/aspect
Evidence from the written text
Explanation of the meaning shown  in relation to the question
Explanation of author’s purpose
Your link to the human experience (self, society, or world)
(A) within ‘The Outsiders’
(B) another  novel  
(C) another text
Sentence Starters:





For example,

For instance,

We see this when,

This is demonstrated,
This shows…

This makes the audience think…

This makes the audience feel…

This makes us understand…
The author did this to

The purpose of this

This was done to



This aspect can be compared to…
This aspect can be contrasted to…
This can be juxtaposed to…
This reminds me of...
In the SEXXXY template below, answer ONE of the following questions:

I am answering question number: 3
Copy and paste your question here: Describe at least one important character in the written text(s). Explain how the character changes throughout the text(s)
Planning
Gather and Order ideas:

Ponyboy was a smart kid, a gangster, has lots of friends, likes to read, and ran away because of darry slapping him, and then went to a h



Introduction:
(Optional)





SEXXXY 1

The book ‘The Outsiders’ has a lot of important characters but i am going to talk about one and that is Ponyboy


This is demonstrated when the book is about to start and it already mentioned Ponyboy was the one who got jumped and possibly the main character of the story


This makes us understand that Ponyboy is the main character because the story is running from his point of view and what he sees is what is being written in the story


The purpose of this was to show us how a gangster life is and how it is hard and extremely painful for the parents eyes to see how their child became a gangster and now he is out there getting in trouble


This can be juxtaposed to what happened in the book ‘The Outsiders’ when they were inside a hospital and Johnny was in a bed and Ponyboy and Darry are outside and talked about what happened and then Darry cried because of Ponyboy and how he almost died and he was so sad that he couldn’t hold his tears and then Ponyboy almost cried too.
SEXXXY 2

The Book ‘The Outsiders’ is written by a female writer named S.E. Hinton which was a very skillful writer


We see this in the beginning of the book where it all started where the ‘greaser’ named Ponyboy was jumped and he was getting bullied by some socs and that moment was almost a real feeling to the reader where he was almost cut and it made it more intense


This makes the audience feel amazed of what the book has in store for us and makes us want to read even more and that is amazing and also scary because they could scare us easily and that will be awesome


The purpose of this was to make the audience feel what was happening to the character inside the story and it was perfect and amazing because they could make us feel very tense of what is gonna happen next in the book


This can juxtaposed to the part in the book where the boy named Ponyboy and his friend Johnny was somewhere near a church where they were staying at and then suddenly started to burn into flames but they were children inside and they tried to save them and this part of the story was so amazing and very tense that it can win an oscar
SEXXXY 3

The book ‘The Outsiders’ has a lot of knowledge in store for us and this book has too much that cannot be learned at only reading it once


For example, the part when Darry slapped Ponyboy because of him not coming back at home early and he was late to come at home and then when Ponyboy was slapped he ran away because of his anger, this part is teaching us to not judge a person that quickly because he might have a reason for slapping Ponyboy


This shows us that this book does have some beautifully meanings and it is an amazing book and there is more lesson’s inside the book that can relate in the human life and can also be a guide for our lives


This was done to show us how to walk the life of a clean man without mistakes that we just have to do what is we know is good and not the bad ones we know


This aspect can be contrasted to an event in the book like the part where Ponyboy and Johnny ran away because of a big mistake that they did but didn’t mean to do it but did it because they were forced to do it and did it by self-defense and that teaches us to be honest and tell the authorities what happened especially to cases like self-defense because the police might think it is murder but actually not.
SEXXXY 4

The Book ‘The Outsiders’ was written by S.E. Hinton and it was in the 19th century were the world was young and violence was not that extreme only blood and no death


This is demonstrated throughout the book and it’s events that were so unlike the time’s today because the gangs in our time are way different from before now in gang wars they have guns and other scary equipment but before when this descriptive book was written it was the time when they only used their own fists and did not rely on other things like deadly and dangerous weapons


This makes the audience feel different and amazed of what are the difference between the gangs from today and before and what are the difference between their life from then and from today


The author did this to show us that the life of having a gang is very hard and sometimes even terrifying and because of that the world changed and now they are really into killing each other


This aspect can be compared to what is happening throughout the book just like when they had a rumble between the wealthy and the poor and when the ‘greasers’ are alone walking in the streets they would get jumped by some wealthy people called in the book ‘socs or socials’ and they always become chaos

Conclusion:
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Ideas/Purposes and Audiences

I have shown commitment and resilience in my learning by adding or changing details to support my ideas.
I have expressed ideas and used statements, evidence, and explanations and attempted to answer the question with some aspects of SEXY paragraphs.
I have formed and communicated ideas by using statements, evidence, and explanations and attempted to answer the question with SEXY paragraphs.
I have shown commitment and resilience to my learning by adding or changing details to support my ideas.
I show increasingly comprehensive ideas by using statements, evidence, and explanations correctly to answer the question in  1-2 SEXY paragraphs.
I have developed my  ideas by adding details or making links to the text, other texts, society, or the world.
I show comprehensive ideas by using statements, evidence, and explanations correctly to answer the question in 3 or more SEXY paragraphs.
I have worked towards creating a coherent, planned whole essay by adding details to ideas or making links to the text, other texts, society, or the world.
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I have achieved a sense of coherence through developing my ideas with SEXY paragraphs.
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I have used grammatical and spelling conventions, appropriately and with only a few intrusive errors.
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